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Overall I think this is an improvement over the last version. You're working with a dark theme which can have challenges as how the viewer's mood reacts with the design. (happy, sad, etc.) I think your choice of complementary colors (blue and orange) help brighten the design up and give attention to those areas. Really nice choice with that. I also really like the overall flow of the design. What I could see changed is that above your navigation links you have little icons representing a home, email, etc. These seem to be redundant with the text links and aren't needed imo. One thing that can help the bottom section with the pictures is to lighten the background value a little bit. Right now it seems like the orange section is floating but with a lighter value for the picture side it will tie it all together better. The last thing that I would consider changing is the PayPal and credit card images near the bottom. To me they don't appear visually appealing. Usually it's not that important to advertise that on the home page. Overall I think you are improving the design and maybe with a few minor tweaks you can push this design further. Nice job.
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